"The Sniper"

[sharpshooter]

I am making a short film adaption of the short story, "The Sniper" by Liam O' Flahtery.

Comments appreciated!!

I realize the clip you are about to witness is not GREAT! It was only a test for the scope of the rifle and the deaths.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=_214x7dbey4

P.S.

Muzzle flashes and sleeper holds need work...;):rolleyes:

And heres a trailer for another film I was working on 2 years ago... http://youtube.com/watch?v=itQV_i2NfME

[ibend1]

pretty good filming there.

[JoeTalls]

I haven't read the short story this is based on, but from the clip you gave us, this looks really good. I like how you showed us what was happening instead of telling us with dialogue. If this is something that is still a work in progress, definitely keep us posted with the final project.

Keep it up!

[nooneimportant77]

pretty sweet, the only thing i would suggest, as you know is work on the muzzle flashes, and if you had a blood sprayer on the guys that get hit in the snow it would be awesome.

[BROKEN Productions]

next time u want a really good fake kick-back on a gun have a friend hold the barrel off screen and hit it against you whilst still holding the gun

[Ladri.]

Funny, I wrote an adaptation of that but it took place in the near future during the 2nd American Civil war. This time it was over oil. I really need to find that.

[spoo2]

looks good so far

[toppie34]

looks really good cant wait till it comes out and you could maybe tweak the sound a bit but its better then my sound... but it looks awesome and it looks like a real movie (like the music )

[HunnyBunchFilms]

That was a great test. I can't wait to see the completed film.

[willphelpz]

Looks awesome, cannot wait to see the film.

[trspballer7]

yea...basically waht you said. the muzzle flashes and sleeper hold needs work. The guy would struggle alot more. Apparently you do not have an older male cousin or an older brother who does these things to you, cause you thrash around lot. Also the sound effect has something to be desired. But still very good.

[domo_sakabato]

That looked incredibly fun to shoot. Can't wait to see the film